Critique Reflection

For my character animation (see previous post), I received critique from my classmates on the design, technical aspects, and plot. They said the plot was simple and easy to follow with a good inciting incident and climax/resolution. Also, the the modeling of the house, furniture, and character were well done, especially with the time restrictions. Motion was good, and many people liked the first-person view. They liked many of my shots and camera movements which were smooth and followed the Rule of Thirds. However, a few criticized the fact that at one point a closing door went through the camera and that the door handles didn't turn as the main character (camera) opened the door. Next time, I will work on the minor details and focus more on working within time limits.